So, the title of this blog post, was one of MY titles, which I liked a lot more than the titles that were given to me, I guess being much too selective in the writing I enjoy, but the best title I got was The Tuesday I lost my Apathy. The other ones were When the Lights Go Out and While Dancing in a Blackout which I guess in retrospect are a bit better than I had originally thought, but still not my favorites. I had thought of "Valley of Rolling Armadillos", "Scars From Mud", and I will never remember the last one, but it probably wasn't very good. So heres the poem I wrote.
The Tuesday I Lost My Apathy
Towels ablaze from the devil's fire shower
Marbles filled with nightmares
Scarlet eyes on velveteen clouds
A drive in movie in winter
White sheets of dried monterey
creating miniature mountains over
crumbled pieces of unlevened bread
A tie of eyelashes and unwanted shoelaces
A hollywood rendition of playground soccer
The sassafras of zyzzavas in the gazebo
Pointed candy warning the hand that
still contains baby fat
A sugary stare of plush ...
Very creative. Shows extreme depth.
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